Not bad
The kicks were just a little too heavy, though. My sub had a field day.
I've never heard the original, but I might look for it because of this. You've put in some reasonably complex melodies at the end without it sounding too busy. Nice work. Nice use of effects, too, especially at the end.
The only thing I don't like is the 16-bit sound of a lot of your percussion, especially the hihats. Swap those out and lower the volume on those kicks and this could be pretty damn awesome.